'Pretty Ugly' - Freckle combo / Skin shading / Hair shade and detail

It's late - and I've not got time to banter much. I've been hard at work on this tonight ( even though it won't look much like I have ) :

The Plain Girl's hair is looking pretty good now - and I've merged the two collections of 'freckles' I had - and it looks pretty good. There's some subtle shading in the skin and shirt too. The skin of the Sexy Reflection is coming along - but it's not really to my liking so far.